Today, am introducing a form which is used by all mostly as a sort of prayer.
is written in rhyming couplets or quatrains and uses the phrase “Lord have mercy”, or a variant on it, as a refrain as the second line of the couplet or last line of the quatrain. In less strict usage, other phrases like “O God, be merciful to me”, and sometimes single words, are used as the refrain.
Amidst the vast ocean of life, lord let my ship sail,
And may I triumph all through the journey without fail,
Pray that truth sustain in the world so fair,
And my ship succeed in finding my share,
My soul bloom as my penance flourish,
In your service, let my ship not perish,
Life is at once too soft and too hard
I have sore troubles mingled with joys unheard
No more can I yield to failure, seek thy sympathy,
What is mine, oh lord, is all your prosperity,
Unable to take it, I step out of thy way,
And leave everything to Lord, what else to say,
With all expectations, seek holy guidance,
To serve as follower of lord as He takes precedence
Known that the worlds stage has a simple equation,
To perform given role is the only solution,
Hence let my conscious be guided to spread divine love,
My life is at your service, I declare with a bow
First published in “Writing geeks magazine-Nov 2015”
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April 13, 2016 at 9:34 am
Beautiful lines depicting faith, devotion and love. 🙂 Thanks for intruding this form to me… 🙂
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April 13, 2016 at 11:02 am
My pleasure Maniparna.Its a learning for me too 🙂
Thank you for stopping by.
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April 13, 2016 at 2:59 pm
wow! what a blessed moving poem! your faith is clearly felt! 🙂
And I am glad to see we both have Kyrielle for AtoZ! 😀
@rosemawrites from
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NaPoWriMo 2016
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April 13, 2016 at 3:19 pm
🙂 🙂
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April 13, 2016 at 10:10 pm
Reads as if from the heart. Well done. Thank you.
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April 13, 2016 at 11:19 pm
🙂 thank you
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April 15, 2016 at 6:59 pm
You’re really good. Today is the first day I visited your blog but I have read three poems and I am fascinated by what you write. All the best. I’ll try to get back.
Visiting from the A to Z Blog Challenge.
Shalom,
Patricia @ EverythingMustChange
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April 18, 2016 at 2:14 pm
My pleasure Shalom, I will try my best not to dissapoint you 🙂
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April 15, 2016 at 10:53 pm
Extremely beautiful and well written Kyrielle. It very much reminded me of a Psalm 🙂
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April 18, 2016 at 2:13 pm
thank you 🙂
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